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PostSubject: Hitomi Miya   Thu Apr 08, 2010 9:25 pm

Name: Hitomi Miya
Nickname:
Age: 16
Date of Birth: feburary 14
Chinese Zodiac: snake
Gender: female
Clan: none

Looks:
Hitomi is 5.2ft tall thin and flat chested. She has purple long straight hair about the length of her waist. She has deep beautiful blue eyes, which is why they call her Hitomi and large round black glasses. Her skin is very pale and also delicate as though her body itself is poisonous. Her eyes sparkle as bright as the stars in the nightly sky and her tears are clear as diamonds. Her uniform consists of a small plaid blue skirt, a white short sleeve button shirt, a long sleeve blue jacket and a yellow ribbon around her collar. She might not be beautiful like many other female ninja but her cuteness if enough to giver her a little more attention that most females in the village. Her second personality would wear this http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/096/6/6/older_hitomi_by_sasuhina123.jpg

Personality: Hitomi had two split personality. The real Hitomi is very kind though a little shy. She doesn't like to fight but does when she has no choice. Hitomi loves to dance and is amazing at it(which she is good considering she is a klutz). In fact her fighting style is like a dance when she uses her chakra. (-_-') Once again she is a klutz and can easily manage to trip on her own feet but even so it is very helpful for being like that makes her lucky and is able to dodge attacks. She also has the tendency to be kidnapped often where is she usually saved at the end.

Her second personality is a bit more creepy still nice but once she sets her eyes on something or someone she will go to the end of the earths to possess it, or claim it as her own forever. She would kill if someone tries to interfere between her and something/someone she wants. Other than that she is kind, sweet, generous. Though make her mad or jealous with something she wants and she will try to kill you. One of the her 'possession' is the younger Hitomi who she considers her younger sister and wants to protect her and make her happy. Usually when they switch places the one in the mind is blocked out from the real world and can not see what is going on, unless the person in charge allows them to see though both personalities can speak to each other in person(still in the mind)
Rank Information
Rank: gennin
Village: Iwakagure

Skill Information
Skill Speciality: ninjutsu/medical(slightly)
Main: ninjutsu
Sub: medical
Elemental Affinity: katon
Special Characteristics:
-Hitomi is amateur at sneaking drugs poisons and medicine(for children) in their food or drinks so in case of a hassle later she can quickly escaped while the drugs take effect to her opponent.

-The real Hitomi is lucky due to her clumziness and escapes out alive in battles but once her darker side show her luck is gone and so is her clumsiness. the dark hitomi must use her wits and strength like the average ninja

-her appearance considered 'cute' enough to make enemies think is strong asking her to join/ or try to kidnap her( the good Hitomi is weak and is kidnaped and her second personality is a lot stronger).

-but the one thing about her that is special is that she is immune to poisons cause apparently she found this out when accidentally drinking her own poisonous drink left for her stalker. This is due to the fact that her blood is actually poisonous which is slightly a bit acidic and only burning a little.

Jutsus
(please note: use the same template for every jutsu)


Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique.

Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: C
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water

Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: D
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed.

Name: Henge no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu allows the user to assume the appearance of another person, animal, or object. This is one of the basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy. Fundamentally, all ninja know this jutsu. The transformation jutsu is considered to be among the more difficult E-ranked techniques, since it requires constant emission of chakra while mentally maintaining the form. On top of that, the user would be, most likely, interacting with the environment. This puts much mental strain on the inexperienced ninja.

Name: Bunshin no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This technique creates intangible copies of the user. The clones are simply illusions and will dissipate when they come into contact with something. The illusions can be seen through by the Byakugan and the Sharingan. A person with normal eyes can also distinguish the clones from the original, since the clones will not disrupt the area around themselves with their movement (won't kick up dust, crush grass, etc.).

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy, this jutsu allows a ninja to free themselves if they have been tied up.

Name: Genjutsu Kai
Rank: E-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.

Name: Shunshin no Jutsu
Rank: D-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily boost the user's reflexes. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance between the user and their intended destination.

Name:fire dance
Rank: C-B
Element:katon
Description: when hitomi closes both her fans she can use it to create a long whip of fire about 10ft. If attacked it will only burn the person they will not catch on fire. The longest it can go for higher ranks is 20 ft.)

Weapons


Name: Tessenjutsus
Appearance: two white iron japanese folding fans with the blades on the edges and at the top. The pictures of cherry blossom petals disguise the fact that is a weapon.
Rank: Rank D
Special Abilities: it can be used as a regular attacking weapon it but it specifically helps her use her chakra(cause she can't use it on her own like a regular ninja). usually the blades at the end contain poisons/or any type of liquid sometimes(if she remember to add it) and takes about 2-5 minutes her oppnent she attacked it with for it to affect.(of course she has the cure for some of them in case she accidentally uses on her friends.) the weapon are the only way she can use chakra take them out and she can not use her chakra.

Origin: (Tessenjutsu is the martial art of the Japanese war fan, tessen. It is based on the use of the iron folding fan, which usually had eight or ten ribs. The use of the war fan in combat is mentioned in early Japanese legends.The practitioners of tessenjutsu could acquire a high level of skill. Some became so skilled, in fact, that they were able to defend themselves against an attacker wielding a sword, and even kill an opponent with a single blow. Like so many other Japanese arts of combat during this era, tessenjutsu reached a high level of sophistication.Apart from using it in duels against enemies armed with swords and spears, the skilled wielder could also use it to fence and fend off knives and poisoned darts thrown at him.

History and Roleplay Sample
History:
history arc:
Hitomi is actually from the future(or present day to be exact). She was illegally created by a group of scientist to kill for them so they could use the bodies to test on. They were trying to create a perfect killer, and had given her the bladed fans to do so, until the group was found and were rejected and killed, but allowed Hitomi to live her life. Her foster grandparents worked at the shrine performing for many people and her parents work in poison control. Hitomi daily schedule consist of school, dancing lessons, and working at her family's shrine. Hitomi's thirteenth birthday she received her old tessenjutsus from her foster grandparent; her foster parents weren't so thrilled at the fact their daughter having a weapon. Hitomi's dream was to become America's next top dancer and she was saving every penny she earned to go there.

love arc:
Hitomi was a normal girl and many people thought so to. She was friendly nice, and even from time to time funny. She made plenty of friends during her school years, until she met a boy named Chris. He had short red hair brown eyes and wore baggy military short with a white tank top. He was kind to her, and she fell in love at first sight. His personality was a bit shy around girls but tough around guys. They became the best of friends even though she had a crush on him.

new personality:
Ever since Hitomi met and became infatuated with Chris, her heart was hurting every time she saw him laughing or joking with a girl. She knew he was shy around girls, except her, and would blush when they acted nice towards him. She started to have dreams of him and her hugging around every dead girl he talked to. Soon when she found out he was dating someone she cried in her bed. Then something in the back of her mind snapped, and something weird happened. She grew a taller, eyes turned green, she turned from a sad face to a happy one, and she blacked out. She didn't remember what happened when she woke up in her bed, she saw she was back to herself but she received news that Chris's girlfriend was dead; though she should be sad for some reason she wasn't.

A loss: Every girl Chris had spoken to ended up dead the next day. The school had to close just to prevent the deaths and it ddid for a while until he was back at school talking to more girls. She had no idea why they kept dying and wanted to help because Chris became depressed that some of the girls he liked were dead. She looked in the mirror asking herself why doesn't he like her when something in the back of her head said "if you can't have him nobody can" with that her eyes turned green and she grew taller and once again blacked out. She awoke in the forest to see Chris dead and her hands bloody. It looked like the blood on the ground was smeared into a heart behind Chris's back which scared her for she found out who killed them.

past: She ran from the law with her Tessenjutsu, still bloody from Chris and without realizing where she was going fell into a hole and losing her memory. Waking up in a forest she wandered seeing two men in cloacks and red clouds, and ran up to them to ask them where the nearest place is., but not before tripping and falling flat on her feet in front of them. They pointed the nearest village and she bowed running off while a few kunais struck in the spots she had stepped on a second ago.(to lazy to kill her).

After being allowed to live there she was sent to a ninja academy because apparently she had some chakra in her. At first she manage to get good grades from dodging attacks when she fell or ran. Soon she became a little more stronger enough to fight back and win a couple battles. Written exams were a lot easier for her to pass since it did not take much energy out of her.

Genin arc
She managed to graduate as a Genin due to how lucky and clumsy she is. Hitomi's ninjutsu was ok but everything else wasn't soon and since she didn't have a home she would try to steal money for food(until later she found out poisonous animals were tasty). Hitomi mostly learn jutsus that can be very helpful with escaping many situations; and maybe sometimes fight. She finds a book about herbs; and from that day she became interested in creating poisons, healing herbs etc.

discovery arc

A few days later she found out someone was stalking her and she tried to invite him for a drink pretending not to know he was the stalker. But she ended up taking his poisonous drink instead but had no effect; from this she thought she made a mistake but when he took a sip from the drink she sipped from he was killed. Out of excitement to find out she was special in some way when skipped all the way to the village to tell them of her discovery but on the way she tripped again.

meeting arc

One day while she was alone about 3 miles from the village she accidently stepped on a snake and was bitten. The snake was colorful so she know it was poisonous but did nothing to stop it for it would not affect her. After a few minutes of watching the snake bite her she became bored and got up to walk away until she heard a voice. A pale man long black hair and a robe with a purple giant bow tied around the waist was kneeling hand on the ground allowing the snake that was stepped on to crawl up. She could remember his name but he was impressed on her immunity to poison. He offered her a chance to join him and shrugged when she shook her head. After that day she never met the man again.

Rp Sample:
It has been a couple days since her stalker has been following her. It was hard enough to walk back home alone much less go out of the village to search(steal) for any money. It even felt weird when he was watching her fall on her feet; it made her felt exposed to him. She couldn't concentrate on her homework at all(not like she was doing good in school anyway).

She would receive flowers at her door along with some deeply disturbing poetry containing threats of that if she tells people will die(yeah right anbu could probably him out quickly). She was scared and from being scared it felt like something in the back of her mind was trying to take over telling her she had to get rid of him. So instead of bringing her usual drug poisons she took a small vile of regular poison with her inside a small picnic basket. On her regular leaving the burrows she took the basket with her hoping her stalker would follow her. Every time she became scared it felt like something was angry in the back of her mind but calmed down as she turned around to call out her stalker.

"Its ok sir you can come out i'm nice" pretending like he wasn't stalking her. The man that came out was not that bad looking tall thin messy black hair and brown eyes. He wore a black jacket not shirt and black pants outfit and was smiling. "Sorry about that wasn't sure" oblivious to the fact she knew he was her stalker. "i was going to have a picnic here would you like to join" she asked and he agreed. She could hear thoughts saying "kill him now" and somehow she agreed.

She laid out the blanket as he sat down; he seemed very friendly except for the fact he has been watching for a while now. Her back faced the man as she pulled out two cups and filling them with tea but secretly pouring a small amount of poison in it. She picked them both up and turned to face him but forgot which cup had poison in it which in her mind she freaked out. She ended up handing him the nearest one hopefully it contain the poison. She sipped about halfway of her cup while watching him drink his.

After a few minutes of nothing happening she realized his is not the contaminated drink and she drunk the real one; crying in her head for her stupidity she offered him something to eat while wondering why she did not die yet.She thought the poison might have not have worked but suddenly the man asked if he was gonna finish her drink. She replied no and he took it out her hands grinning; finishing her drink he stood up and asked if she felt like someone was stalking her for the past couple of days.

Hitomi nodded looking up at him creeped out by his smiled and his response. "well that because... i am your stalker"(really no surprised there you were hiding from a child pretending to be afraid).She jumped up even though she knew he was all along; backing up against the nearest tree he walked toward her grinning down at her. He was about four feet away from her when he stopped shocked; he started coughing and chocking. Falling on the floor he collapsed spitting out blood while Hitomi stood there amazed at the fact her poison worked but she realized she drunken the poison too and started freaking out immediately.

The man died but she did not which confused her; she pulled out the vile from the basket on the ground and drank it.(HOW STUPID CAN YOU GET) But nothing after a while and the first thing that came into her mind was a voice saying "you won't die because your immune" and her surrounding became pitch black. She couldn't see anything for a while until a girl appeared in front of her, and it wasn't any girl it was her; taller and with green eyes smiling evily. "Who are you" she tried to say but nothing came out yet it spreaded like an echo. "Well, that's easy... I'm you" with that she blacked out.


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PostSubject: Re: Hitomi Miya   Thu Apr 08, 2010 9:49 pm

I would say Accepted, but you need to specify an Elemental affinity.
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PostSubject: Re: Hitomi Miya   Fri Apr 09, 2010 5:35 pm

Please only iclude one elemental affinity, you must remove Suiton until Chuunin. Also please add in some elemental Katon jutsu. Thank you. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Hitomi Miya   Fri Apr 09, 2010 6:05 pm

Oh ok cause when I saw the other apps they had two lol brb
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PostSubject: Re: Hitomi Miya   Fri Apr 09, 2010 9:18 pm

Please remove your B rank and up techniques because genin can only have up to C rank. Also please look to the list of canon jutsu so you can have more fire style jutsu.
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PostSubject: Re: Hitomi Miya   Fri Apr 09, 2010 9:24 pm

Wait a admis said I was allowed to be a chunnin
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PostSubject: Re: Hitomi Miya   Fri Apr 09, 2010 9:27 pm

Oh lol I still have gennin on it haha
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PostSubject: Re: Hitomi Miya   Sat Apr 10, 2010 5:44 pm

inuyasha116 wrote:
Nickname: (when the time comes it will be Dokuhime)
Please get rid of the Nickname in the future, when the time comes you'll get one, just not yet, so please remove it Smile

inuyasha116 wrote:
These are for my future higher ranks
(Name:Body flame technique
Rank: B
Element: katon
Description:The user disappears from view. Unlike the Body Flicker Technique, the user goes away slowly, as if his body is being absorbed or burned by an invisible flame.)

Name:fire dance
Rank: C-B
Element:katon
Description: when hitomi closes both her fans she can use it to create a long whip of fire about 10ft. If attacked it will only burn the person they will not catch on fire. The longest it can go for higher ranks is 20 ft.)

Name:kiss of death
Rank:S ninja only
Type:taijutsu?
element:N/A
Description: When the lips come in contact the lips it drains the strength from her victims the longer she is kssing him/her[O.o her!?]. If held long enough it can knock out her victims unconcious, and if only for a second it only takes small amount of chakra.)

(Name:tempting illusion
Ranks:B-S
Type:ninjutsu
ELement:N/A
Description:Usually Hitomi will start to spin creating a light purple mist 25 meters in radius around her. Anyone who enhales the mist will automatically see the beauty of her dance and will be frozen for one post.)
Unfortunately you cannot put down attacks you will be learning in the future, you will have to get them approved when you are able to use them, for most, when you're promoted to Chunin. I suggest if you are using B-Ranked Elemental Techniques to get some background in some C-Ranked Versions of Katon Ninjutsu which you can find here Smile
Ninjutsu Clicky!

Your Jutsu, 'Fire Dance' is fine as long as you make it a technique you know now Smile

Otherwise your app looks awesome. I like your personality it is unique.
Another thing is that I see you said a staff approved you to be a Chunin, if so please tell me them so I can double check, if so then you are basically good Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Hitomi Miya   Sat Apr 10, 2010 7:32 pm

Ok I know it was a admis because their name was in red
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PostSubject: Re: Hitomi Miya   Sat Apr 10, 2010 7:40 pm

And thank u forthe compliment I like creating unique characters. I usually read the same type of poeple with pain and suffering or always being alone. No emotions or pain just hate or despair. That really bores me hearing the same story.
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PostSubject: Re: Hitomi Miya   Sat Apr 10, 2010 7:43 pm

You look fine to me Smile
I just need to get one more mod to agree and you're good Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Hitomi Miya   Sun Apr 11, 2010 3:01 pm

approved :3
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